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Editorial Services


Are you a writer in need of some professional feedback? In addition to being a mentor for organizations like SCBWI and providing conference critiques, I offer packaged feedback on manuscripts and queries.


I specialize in chapter books, middle-grade, YA and/or mysteries.


Outline and first 25 pages           

$400

Want some feedback on your novel-in-progress? I can provide a critique your outline and first 25 pages, so you can see if you're on track.


Query letter and first 10 pages     

$250

Are you ready to query? Let me help you polish that sample and query you send out into the world, so you can put your best foot forward.


Full manuscript                             

$1,200

Want a full mentoring experience? I'll provide feedback (an editorial letter, just like you'd get from an editor) of your manuscript, up to 60k words, and we'll meet virtually up to an hour.


Interview w/ RMFW's Mark Stevens

Interview w/ MG Ninja

If you've always wanted to write a MG or YA mystery, I wrote this book for you!

This book teaches you how to:

Develop a concept (or: how to pick the crime).
Introduce the suspects, and how to plant clues so they're not too obvious.
Create depth with theme and character arcs.
Build an outline using sequences.
Find time to write and how to revise your first draft.
Look for publication once your manuscript is finished.


Get a Clue: How to Plot, Write, and Sell Your MG or YA Mystery is the just-the-facts handbook to write your mystery for MG or YA.

Interview W/ Carly Stevens